''Hi. I'm Larry. And this is my, ****MY**** commentary. My, what an awful commentary.''

Scene 1

''i was inspired by this commercial, but I forgot what it was about. Wierd.''

(Chatroom online. Main character, Jane Doe, logs on as kitten409)

kitten409: Yo.

isx: yo. wassup! hows life?

kitten409: nothing. school was just a burden today.

Maxx: lol. me too.

sturgal5: ditto.

Crissy-kx-: i got an essay. 500 pts. o_O

kitten409: so un1337, the profs.

''1337!!!111/// XD''

isx: ya.

theunknown: .

''What a cool name. THEUNKNOWN...''

kitten409: yo. asl.

theunknown: .

isx: lol. he mustve had a bad day.

Crissy-kx-: wait. i hear footstep.

kitten409: lol

isk: lol

Maxx: ya. footstep. one footstep. lmao

Crissy-kx-: weird. noone there

sturgal5: noone. thats not good.

Maxx: i g2g.

Monitor: Maxx has left the chatroom.

''I think Maxx went to the bathroom.''

Crissy-kx-: ill go check to see whos doing this. brb.

isx: kk

(3 min pass)

isx: err

kitten409: wats taking her so long?

Monitor: No one hears you.

''The No One Hears You thing is kind of freaky. I don't know why. It just is. Elliot got freaked out by that.''

kitten409: ?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: It's useless. Stop trying.

kitten409: What do u want?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: I don't want anything. I am here to tell you that Crissy is dead and you are in danger.

kitten409: is it tru?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: It's true.

kitten409: How shuld i know if this isnt a rotten joke be Crissy and u?

''Crummy line. but hey, I was bored! Really!''

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: Time will Tell.

Fade to black...

''Yeah. Sucky commentary. I promise it will get better! (crosses fingers)''