The writing in bold is the commentary. Got it? Then let's begin.

Scene 1

(Chatroom online. Main character, Jane Doe, logs on as kitten409)

You wouldn't believe how hard it was to type using incorrect spelling and grammar. I'm a Language Art-y type of guy. I can't not ( <- that's a double negative) use correct grammar and spelling. By the way, Larry wrote this scene.

kitten409: Yo.

isx: yo. wassup! hows life?

kitten409: nothing. school was just a burden today.

Maxx: lol. me too.

sturgal5: ditto.

Crissy-kx-: i got an essay. 500 pts. o_O

kitten409: so un1337, the profs.

isx: ya.

theunknown: .

Oooh, creepy. "theunknown."

kitten409: yo. asl.

Larry explained it to me, and I still don't know what "asl" means. Oh, well.

theunknown: .

isx: lol. he mustve had a bad day.

Crissy-kx-: wait. i hear footstep.

kitten409: lol

isk: lol

Maxx: ya. footstep. one footstep. lmao

**Personally, I don't approve of swearing (in "lmao", the a means *ss). Yeah.

Crissy-kx-: weird. noone there

"noone" stands for no one. I think that's weird.

sturgal5: noone. thats not good.

Maxx: i g2g.

"g2g" means "got to go."

Monitor: Maxx has left the chatroom.

Crissy-kx-: ill go check to see whos doing this. brb.

"brb" means "be right back."

isx: kk

"kk" is like a laugh.

(3 min pass)

isx: err

kitten409: wats taking her so long?

Monitor: No one hears you.

I let someone read the script (Larry, don't kill me!) and she didn't get the "No one hears you" part. It's just a creepy throw in.

kitten409: ?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: It's useless. Stop trying.

Finally! theunknown uses correct spelling and grammar! YES!

kitten409: What do u want?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: I don't want anything. I am here to tell you that Crissy is dead and you are in danger.

Only theunknown can hear her, apparently.**

kitten409: is it tru?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: It's true.

kitten409: How shuld i know if this isnt a rotten joke be Crissy and u?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: Time will Tell.

Fade to black...

So, how did you like it? I thought this scene was pretty weird, but hey, Larry made it up. Just kidding! If you're still interested (lol) then read on to Scene 2!