Hey! Elliot again. And like in scene 1, my comments are in bold.
Scene 2
(at college)
Bob: Hey, Jane. How's your classes?
Jane: OK, I guess.
Elliot: WASSUP!!
I remember laughing and yelling at Larry for exploiting me. Oh yeah- Larry wrote this scene.
Larry: Elliot, what are you doing here?
Elliot: Me? I was here all the time. What are you doing here?
Larry: I am the creator of this story.
True, he created it, but I wrote at least half of it. My writing comes later, around scene 5, which I participated in, but didn't fully write. My first me-and-only-me scene is scene 17, but I wrote quite a bit of scene 12. Anyway...
Elliot: (bored) Yeah. I'm the owner of this notebook.
We write all our scripts in a notebook, and on this particular script, I supplied the notebook.
Larry: Oh yeah...
(back to story)
Jane: Has anyone heard from Crissy?
Elliot: No.
Larry: No.
Bob: No.
Jane: Noooooooooooo!
Remember, theunknown told her that Crissy was dead and that she was in danger.
Bob: Hi.
Elliot: What?
Larry: What?
Bob: Uh...
Jane: ...
Larry: OK...
Elliot: OK...
Larry: Why did you say the same thing as me?
Elliot: CONGRATULATIONS!! YOU ENDED THE ONE WORD DRAUGHT! HERE'S YOUR PRIZE!!
(he hands Larry an old, moldy sock)
Larry comes up with the strangest ideas. A moldy sock? One word draught?
Larry: (holding his nose, in nasal voice) Where did you find this? It's gross!
Elliot: I found it in my room today, in the closet.
Larry: Eew!
(he throws it away)
Elliot: Hey! My sock! My dog won't be able to chew on it anymore!
(he runs after the sock)
I think I told Larry I'd kill him for this.
Larry: WHAT?! YOUR DOG?! THAT'S IT! COME BACK HERE!
(he goes after Elliot wielding a knife)
If this "knife" thing was corny, you might want to skip scene 3, because we use it there again.
Jane: OK...
Fade to black...
Weird, wasn't it? I think so, too. If you liked it, read scene 3!
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