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SNS4 With Commentary

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Hi! Me again. If you're willing to endure another scene of torture, read on!

 

Scene 4

(same day, nighttime. Chatroom)

kitten409: i feel sorry for crissy.

isx: ya.

Maxx: that mom is really creepy. =0

Yeah, I agree.

And the smile thing looks weird.

kitten409: ya lol.

And she agrees with me on the creepy part..

isx: lol.

theunknown: .

isx: ?

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Jane: Oh, no...

By the way, when that happens (the thing with the hyphens), the setting changes. Here, it changes from a chatroom to Jane at her computer.

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theunknown: .

kitten409: you...

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: Yes. Me. Me. Me. Me.

kitten409: You can hear me?

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: No, but I can see what you type.

DUH!

kitten409: o.

Monitor: No one hears you.

theunknown: I have come to deliver you a warning. Tomorrow, one of you will be another victim. You have to catch the killer quick. I have one piece of advice for you: The killer has two branches, one on each flying creature.

kitten409: wait, wot?

"wot" looks weird.

Monitor: No one hears you.

kitten409: /whois theunknown

Larry says that's a command- when you put "/" in front of a... command.

Monitor: error: User not found.

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(Jane stares at her computer screen)

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kitten409: hlo? anyone?

It means hello.

isx: yah, wat?

Maxx: you were silent for a wile. were u afk?

And that means "away from keyboard."

kitten409: no.

Maxx: wats going on there? footsteps?

kitten409: No. it's kind of hard to explain. :|

isx: lol. well u can tell us later.

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Jane: (in thought) Yeah. Later.

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Fade to black...

 

Insert music: Beethoven's 5th symphony. LOL!!!!!11

Larry: Elliot, you are speaking to people who know more about computers than I do, so can you not explain everthing? You're scaring me and Xavier here...

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